Thursday, 12 November 2009

When Fate came calling

I tried,
all my life and ran
to keep up pace,
with an ever changing world
of expectations.

I stopped,
tired.
broken.
charred,
with ashes
from the remains,
of wishes unfulfilled,
of dreams turned down,
of ambitions floundered..

And then,
when all doors
caved inwards,
choking life's existence,
came a knock at the door.
I opened to see,
there,
stood my destiny.

The sun shone brighter,
The day seemed right,
All's well with the world,
Fate has finally smiled..

8 comments:

HaRy!! said...

When Fate calls yu grab it up!! but wait for that!!

JD said...

@ Hary, too many twists and turns.. and when nothing seems right, all u can do is work, watch n wait..

Insignia said...

Wow beautiful. But thats what is supposed to happen - dream, strive, disappointment, pick up and live again.

:-)

Anonymous said...

Good One. Thats life na! :)

GMG said...

Hi JD! Nice!! But work, watch and wait doesn't seem too exciting... ;)

Blogtrotter is firmly back to an amazing building... ;)). Enjoy and have a great week!

cool drizzle said...

Hi! JD,

Thnks for your visit,
that was a nice poem
let the sun be bright always

JD said...

@ insignia, absolutely :-)

@ Jyothi, true true, but i still cant get thru to ur posts :-(

@ GMG, yea, true an esp for a traveller like u!! God! how do u manage to travel so frequently??

Will surely go thru the pics and am sure they'll be as good or maybe better than the others..

@ cool drizzle, Thanx a lot and welcome to my blog..

sujata sengupta said...

lovely thoughts and so beautifully penned!